I'd say the lineart is sloppy but it actually works into the style you're going for!
I also like the swinging lamp animation you did
I think maybe some parts could be timed differently to make it be perfect, but all in all. It's a pretty good animations my soldier!
Just some slight timing tweaking would make it even more perfect-er
Since Paparadscha is slow...wouldn't some empty frames make it better?
It actually did have more frames held, but at the time I didn't want to have any frames that had nothing going on in them.
Looking back it probably would have helped to have a few more empty frames.
Just to really drive home how slow she is.
Everything is good and it's cute!
two things to work on, some line cleanup and maybe some line depth?
Thanks for the feedback! I'll definitely work on that in the future.
Don't think this shouls be E rated since, y'know. It says "FUCK YOU!
But the art itself, very well drawn
Yeah, I know, I fixed that already.
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