Beautiful pixel art
Everything's perfect about this drawing
VEry good drawing! I like the colours, the lineart, etc. But there is to things I don't like, Marie's right glove seems to be "camouflageing" into the background. This could be saved by either making the glove slightly blue/darker or have a background that's not pure whiteness. And the second thing i don't like the the circle tool shine you used, just use anything that's doesn't look like a bunch of grapes
Yeah I didn't like using the circle tool, wish I could of done something else but I don't know... it seemed like a good idea at the time. I was rather experimenting new ways to give details and such since I don't really do that with my drawings, I also have another version of this with a grey background but I thought the white one seemed "cool", I might change it, thanks for the advice though, appreciate it
Same thoughts like the review below me, the underwear is unnatural. Also, the lines are "dirty", in some places there are incomplete lines and some places when the lines overlap, you didn't clean them up
Very well drawn *thumbs up* The Cat stockings are cute and a nice touch
Tho this should be a Teen rating because there's sideboob and "butt cleavage"?. Go to edit and put "Adult themes" on "Some"
Thank you ^-^ and I shall thanks for the advice
Body and "clothing" is very well drawn! The expression is also good, the blush is a nice touch. One thing that bothers me is the size of the wine? Sake? idk, the size of the bottle is too big for me
she has a big thirst
For what it is. It's great. the shine on the apple could be drawing better. Because there is a "Cartoony" shine on the left and a "Semi-Realistic" shine on the right
Thank you :) I agree that the shine could've looked a bit better. The part on the right isn't supposed to be a shine though, just a change of color :)
The Hair and Sword are nicely done. Eyes are beautifully detailed, one thing I kinda would prefer is the body to look more "hippish"
thanks for criticizing, and I agree. I'm not fully happy with the body myself, will try to improve that in future drawings :P
Shadows, Lighting, Everything is well drawn. Even the censors are funny
thank you :)
Perfect. Can't really fins anything wrong about this drawing. The shading is cool, the background is cool, the lineart is perfecto. All is great in here
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