Just some slight timing tweaking would make it even more perfect-er
Since Paparadscha is slow...wouldn't some empty frames make it better?
It actually did have more frames held, but at the time I didn't want to have any frames that had nothing going on in them.
Looking back it probably would have helped to have a few more empty frames.
Just to really drive home how slow she is.
Everything is good and it's cute!
two things to work on, some line cleanup and maybe some line depth?
Thanks for the feedback! I'll definitely work on that in the future.
Don't think this shouls be E rated since, y'know. It says "FUCK YOU!
But the art itself, very well drawn
Yeah, I know, I fixed that already.
Very good drawing fellow NG artist
Like the colours especially, one thing I might change is more realism on the shirt when it's going over the boobs cuz real shirts don't do that
Yeah I was working on it too fast and didn't pay attention to the details haha my bad. But thank you it tells me i need to take more time with my work
Beautiful pixel art
Everything's perfect about this drawing
VEry good drawing! I like the colours, the lineart, etc. But there is to things I don't like, Marie's right glove seems to be "camouflageing" into the background. This could be saved by either making the glove slightly blue/darker or have a background that's not pure whiteness. And the second thing i don't like the the circle tool shine you used, just use anything that's doesn't look like a bunch of grapes
Yeah I didn't like using the circle tool, wish I could of done something else but I don't know... it seemed like a good idea at the time. I was rather experimenting new ways to give details and such since I don't really do that with my drawings, I also have another version of this with a grey background but I thought the white one seemed "cool", I might change it, thanks for the advice though, appreciate it
Same thoughts like the review below me, the underwear is unnatural. Also, the lines are "dirty", in some places there are incomplete lines and some places when the lines overlap, you didn't clean them up
Very well drawn *thumbs up* The Cat stockings are cute and a nice touch
Tho this should be a Teen rating because there's sideboob and "butt cleavage"?. Go to edit and put "Adult themes" on "Some"
Thank you ^-^ and I shall thanks for the advice
Body and "clothing" is very well drawn! The expression is also good, the blush is a nice touch. One thing that bothers me is the size of the wine? Sake? idk, the size of the bottle is too big for me
she has a big thirst
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